Category: Writing Craft

Like Gum on the Bottom of your Shoe

By , May 18, 2011 12:38 pm

Imagine writing a logline query so sticky that no agent or editor could forget it. Or creating characters and stories that stick in people’s minds like an annoying ad jingle. Ahhhhhhh…..Ok, I’m back.

Some ideas stick even though there is nobody blogging, tweeting, posting, facebooking, yodeling, or organizing any marketing campaigns around them.

The examples are all around us.

From Snopes.com

Friday the 13th is a perilous day.
Gum takes 7 years to pass through your digestive tract.
Hair grows back thicker after it’s been shaved.
Secret flights rescued Bin Laden family  members and other Saudi nationals out of the U.S. immediately after the 9/11 attacks and before the FBI could interview them.

Oh, and by the way, none of the above are true!

Some from movies and TV stick in your mind like the theme from Gilligan’s Island. (wince, sorry.)

Snakes on a plane.
“Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition!”

Made to Stick by Chip Heath and Dan Heath
Or from politics… 

“It’s the economy, stupid.”
“…this nation should commit itself to achieving the goal, before this decade is out, of landing a man on the moon and returning him safely to the earth.”

Or even from fables… 

The grass is greener on the other side.
Sour grapes.
A rolling stone gathers no moss.

In their book, Made to Stick, Chip and Dan Heath examine the similarities across time, space, and media between short messages that “stick” and those that fade away. They suggest a stickiness test you can apply to loglines, hooks, concepts, characters or anything you want to stick like done spaghetti to a cabinet door. Since Made to Stick is a business book, they have a snappy mnemonic to help you remember the key elements that will make your message stick like gum to tennis shoes: SUCCESs! Woot!

Just for you, I’ve summarized some the key messages from Made to Stick and suggested ways to apply them to your writing.

S simple Find the core of your story. What one single thing when told says volumes? Find your theme and distill it into a few words. To find it, they suggest answering questions like “The single most important thing in my story is….”, if I could only tell you one thing about my story it would be….” 

The Heath’s use Southwest Airlines mantra “Southwest is the low cost airline” and James Carville’s “It’s the economy, stupid” from the 1992 Clinton campaign. These two concepts unified their organizations.

If we think literary, we find: “an orphan boy is really a powerful wizard” or “…the lion fell in love with the lamb.” These aren’t loglines for Harry Potter or Twilight, but they encapsulate the one thing core to the story.

U Unexpected We’ve all heard “same but different” way too many times! Take a known motif and twist it enough that it is still recognizable but new. This triggers our natural surprise reaction and makes us do a double take. Exactly what you want that agent to do! 

The Heath’s use the examples from the anti-drug ads from the 80′s “…this is your brain on drugs,” an image of a frying egg in a hot pan, and the wild Southwest airlines flight attendant who tells her passengers that “while there may be 50 ways to leave your lover, there are only 4 to leave this aircraft!”

The unexpectedness relies on taking something that is familiar and twisting it to capture attention. Kind of like sparkly vegetarian vampires and Harry Potter’s society within a society with many elements very much like our own such as the Ministry of Magic and penalties for underage flying.

C Concrete In a story, we create concrete moments with key details: an aching smile, a eggshell-pink china cup. The Heath brothers suggest that we take that a step further and ground the details in the specifics relevant to our audience. The more universal the detail the wider the message. 

The Nature Conservancy, rather than just asking for donations to save protected lands, now ‘sells’ actual parcels in exchange for donations. While, Nordstrom does not tell it’s sales associates to “provide exceptional service” it tells them about the sales associate who ironed a customer’s shirt or accepted a customer’s returned tire chains (Nordstrom, a high-end department store, does not sell tires!).

Unexpected and Concrete go together, the examples that I gave above from Twilight and Harry Potter are both unexpected and concrete.

C Credible You can imbue an idea with credibility by making it come from a respected source. The secret flights rumor above is more credible because it invokes the gravitas of the FBI. Hey, if the FBI says so… You can also increase the credibility by honing details or adding statistics. The seven year gum, for example, works partly because of the detail of seven, not “a few” years. 

What the Heath’ s call the “Sinatra Test” comes from the song New York, New York when Frank sings…”If I can make it there, I’ll make it anywhere.” You know it’s true because New York City is specific and commands respect, and Frank knows what he’s talking about.

But the stickiest way to make an idea credible is to make your audience the authority, as Wendy’s did in their 1980s ad “Where’s the beef.” Wendy’s used the common knowledge that most fast food hamburgers were small! We all knew that!

E Emotional For a message to stick your readers must care. One of the simplest ways to make people care is to create an association from your concept with something they do care about. 

Ads for a single, named, and pictured starving child in Africa are effective because we all know children of that age. If you can make your message relate personally, that’s even better. Drive around your town and look at the poster board ads for examples like “You can be thinner in 5 days” or “Make $125,000/year working 4 hours a day from your own home.” You may not believe them but you recall them. These ads appeal to your desires and that’s emotional and personal. I’ll leave you with one that I love, the anti-littering ad scattered on Texas highways that speaks to our belief of the tough Texan: “Don’t mess with Texas.”

S Stories This one is more obvious for us. After all we write stories! 

But studies show that when we read stories we create pictures in our heads, more than that, we create a sort of plot-pathway. When the stories we read are logical and consistent (i.e. draw a realistic path) we integrate them into our thoughts and remember them. We also recall the concepts far better. The story becomes lifelike. How lifelike is the magical world of Harry Potter? It springs to life, in part, due to the internal consistency and attention to detail that J.K Rowling applied to her world-building, coupled with her familiar and realistic plot elements.

Made to Stick is a book for anyone who wants their message to stand out. I’ve only touched on a few of the useful concepts in this book. I encourage all of you to read it, and apply the message like superglue to your next pitch, logline, query, and manuscript.

Now go out and be sticky!

(initially published Jan 9, 2011 on SavvyAuthors.com column, Connect the Dots.)

Economic Motivation

By , May 15, 2011 6:42 am

I’m well into the guts of The Box, my YA SciFi adventure, and I’m discovering that money is great motivator. I know, I know…it took me this long to figure *that* out?

 

Money is a motivator for me, certainly, but also for my characters.  My fictional world in The Box is parallel to Earth. Only special people can move between worlds and the population of my fictional world is pretty small. I need a wealthy ruling class so that pretty much limits  the economy of my fictional world. No vast powerhouse of productive workers. Nope, I need a clever economy that leverages the advantage of a small, intelligent, and technically advanced people…..

 

Q: What economic system is stable for a small, isolated population and can support a high standard of living?

Cue Jeopardy music


 

 

Hmm, what we want is an economy that allows much of the population to live in comfort, if not outright wealth. Most should not have to work too hard and have plenty of time to make trouble. LOL. It should also play into their sense of entitlement and fundamental superiority. Oh, and they are also right next to a  large, fat, cash cow (the Earth).

 

Ding, ding, ding…out of time! And the answer is…..

An offshore banking (aka money laundering) economy!

 

Oh snap! This will work nicely! Lightly-regulated, offshore accounts can be found in countries like Switzerland, Lichtenstine or the Cayman Islands. If my fictional world can entice  wealthy Earth people to deposit funds into its high interest, private, off-world banks then my fictional aliens are both dependant on Earth and maintain some control over some very powerful Earth people. Hmm, lots of inherent conflict in that one! I like it.  It gives me a range of careers to play with and instantly creates a potential caste system. All excellent motivators. I can take the economy into the shadier parts of  offworld banking or keep it on the ethical side. I can also pit the ethics supporters against the off-worlders with, shall we say, more flexible ethics. ROFL.

 

 

The first page of Adam Smith's The Wealth of Nations, 1776 London edition

The first page of The Wealth of Nations, 1776 London edition

 

To quote Adam Smith:

It is not from the benevolence of the butcher, the brewer, or the baker, that we expect our dinner, but from their regard to their own interest. We address ourselves, not to their humanity but to their self-love, and never talk to them of our own necessities but of their advantages.

You gotta love him for providing some excellent motivation!
Hmm, now all I need is a map!  Maybe, I can even add some crystal waters and white sand beaches….mmmmm

 

Are Audiobooks different?

By , November 28, 2010 8:07 pm

I’m an audiobook nut. My iPod is filled with a few songs ~200MB and 31.8 GB of audiobooks. I kid you not. I “read” many books by audiobook.  If I have any random mindless task, my earphones are in and I am listening.

When I am trying to master some author’s technique I often buy the book in print and as performed by a reader. I often read along while I listen to see if I would have read the passage the same way the reader interpreted, using the same inflection and emotion.

I am amazed by how often I would not. At least on a first reading where I didn’t know the characters or story. The audiobook readers bring extra emotion into the story, they add their interpretation of what the author intended.  I think this is interesting for an author to consider when writing.

Aspiring authors are told to read aloud.  I do, I read most of what I write aloud in my voice with lots of emotion and inflection. I pace my office and terrify the dog.

When I read my own work aloud to other people, I’ve heard the comment that what I read was great, and interesting and they wanted more. One person commented that when I read, the story and my characters came to life. Now she didn’t say that it was lifeless on the page, but I’m not an idiot! lol. Clearly, I hear emotion and inflection in my head that sometimes does not ooze out onto the page.  Interesting.

I spent some time breaking down some of my writing that I had read before an audience. I did find that I tend to be spare in my emotion in certain areas. I tend toward subtlety and understatement. Now that I know this I can beef up areas of my writing that need to be emotional. I can use my own lively reading style as a double check on the emotional content of my words.

And the audiobooks? I just love them. I do. lol.

NaNoWriMo…Day 1, Year three

By , November 1, 2010 6:58 am

Sounds like the opening line to a Space Opera. And perhaps in a way it is, no not really.

This NaNo I’m going for something completely different.  No plan, no plot, no mindmaps or spreadsheets. I’ve been very busy with other WIPs and October just got away from me.  This will be different. I hope I will not end up with the output from the milllion monkeys at the end of the month.

We’ll see.

I’m not completely lost in the pantsing forest though. I found some great online resources that I have bookmarked.:

TV Tropes:

This is a community of folks who are entertained by documenting all the story tropes in current popular media. This includes not onlybooks and film, but also anime, computer games, and real life examples. This is an amazing site and I challenge you to leave without new ideas about your story.

The internet pubic library:

Where a great deal of information on the seven plots and 36 dramatic sitations live as well as the hilarious Classic in a Minute. I encourage you to read The Collected Works of EE Cummings. C’mon it only takes a minute!

The Random Plot Generator:

Which takes it data from the lists of Advice to Evil Overlords, Starship Captains and Murphy’s Laws of Combat.  It gives such gems as….

Further Evil (Advice on Fortress Construction):
Your Command Center should have a heavily guarded room at the bottom of a 100-story subterranean shaft that contains a sophisticated bus-sized computer with a fake encoded plan, no external links, and no real function whatsoever. The real command center will be a satellite-linked laptop on a card-table with a folding chair, near the top of the elevator shaft, behind a door marked ‘standpipe valves’ that’s accessible through the unlocked janitor’s closet.

When I get stuck with this month’s story I will refer to my list of evilness and tropes. But I am missing one important element! Romance….yes, well that is easily solved by the Telenovelas.  This site has all the Telenovela plots, all I need to is choose which….Hmmmmm..

Backup Strategy

By , August 25, 2010 8:20 am

No, seriously, do you have one?

I had an out of body moment this morning. I lost the latest version of my manuscript. Sync services ate it.

I use a system for writing that involves two computers, SugarSync, and Scrivener among other programs. Now, I adore Scrivener. It allows me to manage my complex manuscript like the project it is. A Scrivener project is built around a package of individual text files indexed by the Scrivener application and presented in the UI as an integrated whole. There is a variety of metadata around each file that includes attributes like last changed, scene, status, or anything else you could possible imagine or create. It also allows you to take snapshots (i.e. versions) of any part of the project and save them so you can roll back if you decide that the outrageously brilliant plot twist involving slugs and penguins was just a wee bit too far out.

It also means that there are about a bazillion tiny files inside a Scrivener package. Not a big problem, unless you are syncing the files individually. Ahem.

Syncing between computers is hard. I’m certain of this because I’ve used a broad assortment of sync services over many years with little to no success. Man, it must be a freaking hard problem. But in the past couple of years, sites like SugarSync, Apple’s .Me, and DropBox all seem to have it working pretty well. Until it doesn’t, of course. And let me say here that I use all three services for different things.

That’s what happened to me today. I lost my latest version of my manuscript A Fault in Time in a sync collision that corrupted the Scrivener package. This is the manuscript that finaled in the contest, the one that an agent has requested. I said I had an out of body moment, because that’s what it was. An out of body moment.

I looked stupidly at the terrifying error message that told me my file was horribly corrupted.

I said, “*&%#”.

I launched Time Machine, restored the file, and kept working.

Total elapsed time lost….about 20 seconds. (Ignoring the time to blog about it.)

Total data lost….nothing.

What’s your backup strategy? Have you tested it lately?

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